Pukman @ WinK: the community that time didn't forget

After sending your attendance email and writing your 十分は十分 post, it's time to try to finish your collaborative essays. Work together. Call me to your desk for help with grammar and comments, etc. Remember you should correct as many grammar and spelling mistakes as possible before the deadline. Check out the Orangoo spellchecker.
For phrases, check out the Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English Online.

Checklist:
spelling
grammar: subject, verb, 3rd person singular present "s", past/present
paragraph: does each paragraph have a clear topic? at least 3 sentences?; no returns in the paragraph?; 2 returns after each paragraph?
links
pictures